Thursday 10 October 2013

Dream Room: Final Text & Poster Board

In English class, to practise description writing techniques we read short descriptive stories. With examples in mind, our teacher assigned us to write a descriptive text. The theme chosen, by the teacher, was Your Dream Room. Each of us were to write of Dream Room.

When the day came that our Dream Room descriptions were due, we were told to share them out loud. This began the second step. The second step was correcting by ourselves our text. Reading out loud helped many of us to detect and correct the majority of our mistakes. Sharing our descriptions also allowed us think of ideas we'd like to incorporate into our Dream Room.

With the second copy completed, then came the third step. We were to correct our descriptions again. Although, this time we were to correct our text with the help of our teacher. One by one we each sat down with our teacher and corrected our text for the second or third time. This produced our third and final copy. From the final copy we were then to creatively depict our Dream Room on a poster board.

Dj Dreamroom Eng Finalcopy2013 by Greenprop


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